Dear Astar,
Hi, how are you? I hope everything is fine. I am sorry I haven't answered your last letter in a long time, I was busy with moving an apartment, but that’s it- it has finally happened after a long time.
I want to tell you about something that happened to me during this time you weren't here (as usual... things happen to me mainly when you aren't here), and I need your advice.
Last week, I was accepted to work at my uncles' friend's business.
This kind of work doesn't demand a lot of me. My main work there is arranging all the work orders from other companies. You are probably asking yourself where lies the problem.
So… it demands many work hours a week that I don't have.
Here I need your advice. I don't know what to do because I don't wanna lose this job, but the thing I'm afraid of is that it may hurt and disturb my studying at school. I hope you can help me with my indecision.
That's all for now, I am looking forward to hearing from you.
I miss you very much and I hope you'll come back as soon as you can.
Love,
Avital.
1 comment:
Avital,
As required, your essay has the proper structure of an informal letter - division into four paragraphs. I must tell you that I was bound into a chair while reading your essay - it was interesting, clear and beautifully written! Keep on creating such fascinating essays!
Michal =D
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