A trip to Poland

88 Pine Street
Holon
December 3, 2009

Ms. Gilat Simon

Principal
Kugel high School
1 Mota Gur Street
Holon

Dear Ms. Simon,

This year students from your school have been given the opportunity to join a group of Israeli students and teachers going on a trip to Poland. I am writing because I wish to complain about the high price parents should pay for their children in order to go on the trip to Poland. This kind of trip is an important one and I think that it is very unfortunate that only students who have the means will be able to afford this sum and take part in this important trip.

First of all, as an 11th grade student, I would like to take part in this meaningful journey to concentration camps in Poland. This journey is very significant to Israelis and Jews particularly and is known as interesting for every student. But, due to the very high price, some students will not be able to participate in this trip.

Moreover, Poland is part of our important history, which can not be forgotten and we should pass it on to the new generations. This trip is very important to some students more than others, for personal reasons, but they are unable to take part in this trip because of its high price.

In my opinion, that kind of trip is a very important one and it will be unfortunate if students miss it due to its high price. I think that the price should be lowered in order to allow all the students to take part in this memorable jurney.

I look forward to a prompt reply.

Yours truly,

Avital Itzhak.

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