A letter of application

88 Ha'arazim Street
Holon
April 29, 2010

UCLA's University
88 Pine Street, NY
New York

Dear Sir/Madam,

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I am 21 years old and I have just completed my army service and I would like to study psychology. I understand you have an excellent course in psychology which I am interested in attending. I am writing because I would like to apply for admission to your school.

To begin with, I have always been interested in this particular field and I was studying this subject and majored in high school. Recently, I have heard from lots of yours students, which have already completed their psychology studies that they were very enjoy to study at your university.

In addition, I have finished psychology studies during my high school project, which was very helpful and significant to me. Moreover, it would be helpful to have more specific details about the psychology studies at your University.

Finally, It would be a significant step for me to be accepted at your university and finish my psychology studies at your university. I would be grateful if you help me fulfill my dream.

Thank you for your assistance

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I look forward to hearing from you
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Yours truly,
Dana Barel

(75)

Daphna

See the World

88 Pine Street
Holon
April 15, 2010

See the World

10 Fleet Street

New York

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am 21 years old and I have just completed my army service. I am writing because I am interested in going on an organized tour to the United States. My former organized trip was not successful as I expected. Recently, I have heard from lots of my acquaintances that your organized trips are very successful. Therefore, I would like to join, with my boyfriend, a trip organized by your company.

First of all, I am interested in going on an organized tour to Florida, to visit Disney World. Also, I am interested in an extreme type of vacation combined with a lot of fun and English-speaking guide. On my vacation I would like to see a little of everything and feel such a satisfaction. I would be grateful if the age group that me and my boyfriend join, is of the same age as we.

In addition, it would be helpful to have more specific details about the trip schedule and the sites. Moreover, I would like to know about the cost of the trip, and it will be helpful if it comes with specifications.

Finally, I hope you could respond to my requests and help me feel satisfied and organize my next tour at you travel agency. I am looking forward to your trip.

I would be grateful if you could reply as soon as possible.

Sincerely yours,

Maya Kelly

Much better.

(85)

Daphna

When Love Takes Over

88 Pine Street
Holon
March 31, 2010

Radio Manager
Tel- Aviv's local radio station
10 Ha'arazim Street
Tel- Aviv

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am an 11th grade student, and I have read about your plans to produce a series of one-hour programs for teenagers. I am writing to you because I would like to suggest an idea for a new radio show for teenagers, which will present love issues.

On this one-hour radio show, teenagers could tell about their problems and get an advice from other listeners. The teenagers will not be asked to indentify with their names, which will allow them ask anything they want. This program will allow teenagers to be more conscious to problems that might suddenly appear in their own relations and be learn how to deal with them.

In my opinion, this subject is important because love is a feeling that takes over, especially at this complicated age and we can not manage it. I believe that teens would be very interested with this show because in this period of the adolescence the most suitable subject for teens is love. We can not control our feelings and it causes us sometimes strange moods.

To conclude, I think that it is the most suitable time for issues like love for teenagers. In their period they are still ashamed to common their relatives with all their questions and problems. Therefore, I believe that such a program will be very useful for them. I would like to thank you for considering my suggestion.

Sincerely yours,
Avital Itzhak

Good work.

(90)

Daphna