See the World

88 Pine Street
Holon
April 15, 2010

See the World

10 Fleet Street

New York

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am 21 years old and I have just completed my army service. I am writing because I am interested in going on an organized tour to the United States. My former organized trip was not successful as I expected. Recently, I have heard from lots of my acquaintances that your organized trips are very successful. Therefore, I would like to join, with my boyfriend, a trip organized by your company.

First of all, I am interested in going on an organized tour to Florida, to visit Disney World. Also, I am interested in an extreme type of vacation combined with a lot of fun and English-speaking guide. On my vacation I would like to see a little of everything and feel such a satisfaction. I would be grateful if the age group that me and my boyfriend join, is of the same age as we.

In addition, it would be helpful to have more specific details about the trip schedule and the sites. Moreover, I would like to know about the cost of the trip, and it will be helpful if it comes with specifications.

Finally, I hope you could respond to my requests and help me feel satisfied and organize my next tour at you travel agency. I am looking forward to your trip.

I would be grateful if you could reply as soon as possible.

Sincerely yours,

Maya Kelly

Much better.

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Daphna