New Technology

In the last few years, we can see how the advance(gr.) technology development became(gr. - use the present perfect) more and more useful. The most popular developments are the Internet and the Computer. These new technologies have many possible uses in education, in school and out of it, like business, fun, and even for shopping. The question is whether the computers will be able to replace teachers one day. I would like to state my opinion on this issue.

On the one hand, I believe that computers will indeed be able to replace teachers at school one day. Today, our lives evolve around the Internet. I think that the Internet is the best communicate(ww.) tool between the students and their teachers, they give us home work and communicate with us through the Internet. Moreover, it is very easy and saves time when you are studying at home in your spare time.

On the other hand, I think that learning at home through the computer could detract from me my social skills(phr.) by studying alone at home without extrnal stimuli. I believe that social skills are not less important than studying and saving time, and even more important.

To sum up, I think that the computers will be able to replace teachers one day. But, I think that if it would be(gr.+ww.), it should be partially and not absolutely(phr.). I believe that in this case, our social skills are more important than our time.

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Daphna